Thursday, May 7, 2020

Writing

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  1. 🌟🌟🌟Writer of the day
    Peyton, I like had you have used your word list to create a descriptive piece of writing. You have also used a comma and a exclamation mark correctly. Keep it up🌟🌟🌟

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  2. Room 2, your dragon stories are terrific. You are really using your imaginations to describe interesting stories. Well done.

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  3. Those were some fantastic dragon stories Room 2. You have some great imaginations. I loved how you used exclamation marks and commas. Miss Rihari only asked for 2 sentences yet some of you wrote a lot more. I enjoyed reading these stories.

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  4. I knew where to raise my voice and make it louder because of your exclamation marks (!). Well done room 2!

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